First Review on my Short Story!


Got my first review for Alternate.


Got five stars and a lofty comparison to Stephen King!! Definitely nowhere near his caliber, but I appreciate the compliment! Thanks so much Aimee!

Here’s the review:

“There is a future where we have learned to manipulate time. Of course, mankind uses this power for their own greedy ends. The story revolves around a man shattered by grief, holding on to the hope that this power can give him back what he has lost.

The story makes one wonder if mankind should be attempting to control such a crucial and powerful force. Whether is be for selfish or altruistic reasons. The question arises; just because we can do something, does that mean we should?

I’m a huge fan of Stephen King’s short stories. Ernie Luis is honestly of that caliber. Immediately, you want to know more about the brooding protagonist. You can almost taste the whiskey on his tongue and feel the pain in his heart.

The author quickly draws the reader into this fantastic story of a not so distant future. I was caught up in anticipation, wanting to know more. The story quickly thickens and then twists at the end with a eye opening climax.

My only criticism. I wanted to keep reading.”


Here’s the link if you wanna check it out on Amazon.


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